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| | The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) | |
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DaisyRaggs Superstar
Posts : 663 Simoleons : 673812 Reputation : 838 Join date : 2012-03-08 80 Location : Virginia, USA
| Subject: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:10 pm | |
| The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 When Ralf got home he grabbed Beatrix and gave her a hug. He was finally beginning to realize how funtunate he was to have a beautiful healthy woman in his bed. And she seemed to be made for having his babies. While he was playing Red Hands with Aaron . . . Beatrix started into labor. She delivered a beautiful baby girl with red hair and grey eyes. They named their daughter Selena. She handed his only daughter to Ralf. "She's beautiful Beatrix. She looks like you", he said. Ralf held the baby so Aaron and Kieran could "talk to the baby". Ralf fed Selena a bottle of milk. When Rachel came, Beatrix made sure she got to hold her youngest grandaughter. Rachael cuddled Selena. "I'll put her in her crib before I leave", said Rachel. Then she hugged Aaron goodbye. Ralf grabbed Beatrix and gave her a hug. He dropped to one knee and said "Beatrix, will you marry me?" "Oh Ralf YES!", she answered excitedly. Ralf Wylde started life as a peasant fifty-four years ago and there he will remain for the rest of his life. The End
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| Subject: Re: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:37 pm | |
| Are.You.********.Kidding.Me. Ralf ended up with that hooker?! He deserves much better than her! I honestly expected her second child to be Vincents. Even though my friend doesn't agree with what I just said, I don't think she's all there in the head. |
| | | DaisyRaggs Superstar
Posts : 663 Simoleons : 673812 Reputation : 838 Join date : 2012-03-08 80 Location : Virginia, USA
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| Subject: Re: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:38 pm | |
| lol sorry about all the weird comments, we just got very into this story XD |
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| Subject: Re: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) Mon Aug 06, 2012 11:23 pm | |
| That story literally made me crazy for a week. xD I'm okay with the ending I guess, but if Rachel and Ralf got together it'd be kind of messed up, considering they share grandchildren. :/
I enjoyed the story! Very good, I did notice a few typos but it was nothing I couldn't understand throughout the story. I definitely liked Rachel the most though. |
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| Subject: Re: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) Tue Aug 07, 2012 1:24 am | |
| I don't know if I'd say Rachael was my favorite, but she did seem to be the only female that wasn't a hooker on the game. XD |
| | | BBdoll3 Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) Sat May 04, 2013 1:56 pm | |
| I'm looking over some of your other stories, hun. Was at Docs comments. It's amazing how we get sooooo consumed over your stories, Daisy. Do you realize just how talented you are, sweetheart? You are 'Da Bomb of a Writer'.... I hope you continue to write more great - greats! | |
| | | Lilly LeClaire Vocal Legend
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| Subject: The Life and Times of Ralf Wylde! Sat May 04, 2013 2:55 pm | |
| Daisy, I must have missed this back in August (maybe when my computer was down for a while). Actually, I loved the ending. Beatrix and Ralf have some of the same aspirations and behavior--if I remember correctly. I didn't like Beartrix's behavior as far as her mother was concerned. But then some of what happened had to do with Lord Vincent whose behavior was likely not that far off from other royalty during Medieval times--the old "love 'em and leave 'em" strategy. And, it wasnt' that uncommon for nobles, etc to have an illegitimate child or two (of course, they didn't call the child illegitimate but not sure I can use the other term on this website). It's nice to see that Ralf is having a family and he and Beatrix seem to be a well matched pair and love each other. I love your stories and the way you draw us into the story with your Sim characters. You have us laughing and crying, cheering and booing, happy and sad along with your characters as they journey through life. And, you do an excellent job with your CC in that you make it era specific and of picture taking. Lilly | |
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| Subject: Re: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) Sat May 04, 2013 4:02 pm | |
| I may do some 'catch-up' on this one. The only one I was really into was my Fav - Picket Fences! I read some of one other one. Think it was the one with the Indian or something? He married her and had a bby, and she left with him and returned to his village. She got prego and went back to see her family and had the bby there. The chief could not have kids so he wanted his son - her husband WooHoo with his wife so she could have a bby. I forget the name of that story. I don't claim to be Miss Daisy, and my story telling is far from the way she has it. But I'm sure you get the pic if you've read the story. Anywhoooo, that one was an interesting story also. I guess I need to do some reading on some of her other ones now. Like you said, she draws you in hook line and sinker. Dang, she would be a dynamite "Soap Writer". "The Twist and Turns in Buford County". "Days with Ralf Wylde". "What did Your Papa Say" or maybe, "All of Papa's Boys!" I'm talking about all of hunky Cowboys Miss Daisy has created. | |
| | | Lilly LeClaire Vocal Legend
Posts : 943 Simoleons : 684947 Reputation : 476 Join date : 2012-03-10 72 Location : Arizona USA
| Subject: The Life and Times of Ralf Wylde! Sat May 04, 2013 4:43 pm | |
| BBdoll, I think the story that you are referring to is "Blood Brothers!" And, Daisy has a lot of wonderful story and all of them with excellent pictures. It's sad to see the endings. But while she's sharing them, I'm enjoying them. Lilly | |
| | | DaisyRaggs Superstar
Posts : 663 Simoleons : 673812 Reputation : 838 Join date : 2012-03-08 80 Location : Virginia, USA
| Subject: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Sat May 04, 2013 5:42 pm | |
| Thank you so much Lilly and BBdoll. The Indian story that BBdoll remembers was on the Exchange and was called "Lizzy's Story!". Her Indian husband was a Romance Sim named Running Wolf. "Blood Brothers!" was my other story with Channah Whitefeather. I promise to keep y'all informed by posting special occassions with pics of the characters in "Picket Fences!" I've become very attached to them and still play them every day. | |
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| Subject: Re: The Life and Times Of Ralf Wylde! Part 38 (The End) Sat May 04, 2013 6:26 pm | |
| Yep! You are correct, Missy! Can't wait for the Specials to arrive. I'll be waiting! | |
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