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 Picket Fences! Part 24

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PostSubject: Picket Fences! Part 24   Picket Fences!  Part 24 I_icon_minitimeThu May 03, 2012 3:32 am

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At Claudia Alan's house . . .

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She decided to swallow her pride and called Rhys. It had been several days since she had seen him at the lake and really wanted to see him again.
"Hello Rhys, can you come over?", she asked.

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"Sure, I ain't got nothing better to do. I'll be right over", he said.

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Rhys soon arrived at Claudia's house and she greeted him at the door with a tender kiss.

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"You know something, I was thinking before you called, 'I should call Claudia today'", said Rhys.

"Really, well that makes me feel better about calling you", she said.

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"How long have you lived in Buford Falls?", asked Rhys.

"I moved here a couple of weeks ago. Jonathan was one of the neighbors who came to welcome me to the neighborhood", she said, "Have you and he been friends long?"

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"Yeah, me and him grew up together in the Pleasantview Ophanage. He had been there for awhile when I got there, so he was kinda like a big brother to me", said Rhys.

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"I was an only child and when I was a little girl, I always wondered what it would be like to live in an orphanage. You know, having a lot of other kids to play with all the time", she said.

"It wasn't all fun and games, I can tell you that", he said.

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"Rhys, why were you sent to the orphanage?", she asked.

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"My parents were killed in an automobile accident when I was a kid and there won't nobody left who wanted me", he said.

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"That's hard to believe. You must have been an adorable little boy", she said while nuzzeling his neck.

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"That happened a long time ago. I really don't like to talk about", he said.

"Oh, alright, I understand", she said.

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"Now let's talk about us", he said.

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But before he could say more the telephone started ringing. Claudia got up to answer it. Jonathan was calling to ask how she was doing. She talked to him for a few minutes before going over to Rhys.

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"Now where were we?", she asked.

"I was about to tell you about us", he said.

"What about us?", she asked.

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Then he gave her a makeout kiss.

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He picked her up in his arms and . . .

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Carried her into the bedroom.

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"Do you want me Claudia?", asked Rhys.

"Yes!", she said.

Later . . .

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"You should have told me it was your first woo hoo. I would have tried to made it more special", said Rhys.

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"It couldn't have been any more special than it was. I'm glad I waited until I met you", she said.

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"I"m sorry, but I got to leave. It's almost time for Ryan to get home from school", said Rhys.

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"I wish you could stay, but I know your son comes first", she said.

"Yeah, responsibilies . . . you know", he said.

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Then Rhys walked out the door . . .

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But before he left, he went over to the gnome.

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He looked all around . . .

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Before he picked it up. Then it disappeared.

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Rhys stole Claudia's gnome.

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After Rhys left, Claudia came out of the house and walked . . .

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All the way down to the edge of the sidewalk . . .

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And disappeared.

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When she returned the gnome appeared on the sidewalk in front of her.

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She picked it up and put it back where it belonged before she went back inside.

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On the other side of town at Joyce's house . . .

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Her grandaughter Arlene came to visit.

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"Hi Grandma, how are you feelng?", asked Arlene.

"I'm feeling pretty good, but having you come visit makes me feel even better", said Joyce.

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"Grandma, I need to talk to you about something", said Arlene.

"Sure sweetheart, sit down", said Joyce.

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"Grandma, I'm in love with this drooly guy, but he doesn't even notice me", said Arlene.

"Is this drooly guy a boy in your class at school?", asked Joyce.

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"No, he's not in school anymore. He's older than me."

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"Older, how much older?"

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"He's an adult. But Grandma, he's not THAT old."

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"Arlene, he's too old for you. You should be thinking about boys your own age. You can't possibly have anything in common with this man."

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"But I can't stop thinking about him."

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"Who is this man?"

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"Rhys Sawyer, our neighbor who lives across the street. You've probably seen him Grandma. Isn't he gorgeous?", she said.

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"Arlene, he's definitely too old for you. You're just a baby compared to him", said Joyce.

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"I thought you would understand. You're just as bad as my mother!"

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"I'm telling you for your own good young lady!", Joyce said.

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"You're just jealous because I might have a chance with him and he wouldn't ever look twice at an old lady like you."

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Then Arlene walked out the front door.

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But before she left, she went over to the gnome and looked all around . . .

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Then she picked it up and it disappeared. She stole her grandma's gnome.

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Arlene has more in common with Rhys than anyone would guess.

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"Rhys, this is Joyce. Something's come up you need to know about. Can you come over?"

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"Sure, I'll be there in a few minutes."

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And back at Claudia's house, something else has come up that Rhys needs to know about.

To be continued . . .













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That was a great chapter Daisy, I loved it.
I am sure Claudia was pleased that she had Rhys for her very first time, 8) I bet he is shall we say very experienced in the Love Making area. He gets plenty of practice, lol.
I was glad to see Joyce back in the picture and the discussion she had with Arlene her granddaughter seemed very real. Glad she told her that Rhys was to old for her. I wonder if she will get a boyfriend?
I feel sorry for Claudia though, getting pregnant her very first time and she is not married; back in those days that could be a big problem. Eeekk.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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I really don't like Larry. I know this is random- but his wife cheats on him, and he's just like "Hey, we're all friends here! Very Happy " That's just messed up. It makes me think HE'S cheated on her, or is still cheating on her.

And I'm wondering if Rhys has any affection at all for Claudia? I mean, he's not just going to ditch the poor woman is he? He got her pregnant. I'm guessing they'll get close, then at the last minute, she's going to have a miscarriage. Then when he finds out, he ditches her.
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Wow, with all the different speculations from the other readers I can not wait for the next chapter to see how it is going to play out.
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PostSubject: Picket Fences!   Picket Fences!  Part 24 I_icon_minitimeFri May 04, 2012 9:27 am

I enjoyed this part. Sure was funny with all the gnome stealing. The last thing I expected was to see Rhys come out of the house, after WooHoo with Claudia, and then steal her gnome. (And, then Arlene stealing her grandmother's gnome.) Looks like Claudia has a NooBoo on the way. Rhys sure had a very happy smile on his face after the WooHoo with Claudia. A Romance Sim all the way! The arguement between Joyce and her granddaughter, Arlene was interesting. I was wondering how Joyce would respond when Arlene told her about her "love crush" on Rhys. If Arlene and Rhys are more alike then one would expect, it may be that they have more in common than what it would appear. Although WooHoo with 3 woman in one family seems a bit much, it's true form for a smooth talking Romance Sim. It will be interesting to see what Joyce says to Rhys and how he responds. Looking forward to the next part. Thanks for sharing. Lilly Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Picket Fences! Part 24   Picket Fences!  Part 24 I_icon_minitimeSat May 05, 2012 1:11 am

LoL Interesting! This is the first time reading Sims Stories. I sort of liked it. Did you take pics as you played the game and write something up about it? This is good.
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Thanks BBdoll3 for reading and commenting. And yes, I take pics while I'm playing and then write the story about what happened. I more or less have a plot in mind while playing, but sometmes the Sims do things unexpected that changes it. flower
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LoL This is great. Seems like a lot of work. You really have to keep up with stuff going on. Great Job! Looking forward to reading more of your stories! ;)
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